Services

I believe good books and good writers will always find a home … but you can’t go it alone.

From draft to deal, I help writers level up.

Whether you're polishing a manuscript, navigating the query trenches, or launching your book into the world, I offer:

  • Developmental editing that transforms your story (and your craft)

  • Submission package critiques that get agents to say yes

  • 1:1 consults to demystify publishing—traditional or indie

  • Workshops & talks tailored to writers at every stage

  • Plus a free weekly newsletter packed with insider tips, tough love, and motivation

Let’s get your book ready for the spotlight.

My complete list of services and prices is below ↓

SUBMISSION PACKAGE CRITIQUES - $200
Query Letter, Synopsis, & First Ten Pages

I have read thousands of submission packages over the course of my career, both as an editor and as a reader for literary agents. I know exactly how to get agents excited to request your manuscript. I will give you detailed notes on your query letter, synopsis, and first ten pages and will critique a second version once you revise. I will also answer all of your questions as you embark on the submission process.

SUBMISSION PACKAGE CRITIQUE (Small) - $100
Query Letter or Synopsis Only

Just looking for a query letter critique? Or a synopsis critique? I can help. This package also includes a second critique once you revise.

PHONE CONSULTATION - $100
1-Hour

This is your chance to ask someone with real industry experience all of your questions about your writing career and the publishing business, whether you plan to publish traditionally or independently.

DEVELOPMENTAL EDITING - $25 per 1,000 words

I currently offer one package for all writers looking for an editor. I read your entire manuscript 2-3 times. I then send your manuscript back to you marked up with comments via track changes along with a shorter note of my overall thoughts. You can use all of this as a map to revise from. This is a big picture edit and covers everything from the overall readability to character development, pace, and plot holes as well as smaller line notes. After you revise, I will read and review your revision and do more of a line edit on that version, making sure your manuscript is truly ready to meet the world.

This package includes critiques of your query and synopsis and help while you're submitting. If you plan to independently publish, I'll critique your marketing copy and offer advice on that process. Working with me will transform your writing, but don’t just take my word for it. You can find a small sample of the dozens of testimonials I’ve received here.

SPEAKING AND LEADING WORKSHOPS - Pricing available upon request

I am available to speak at conferences, workshops, academic classes, and other events on everything from the act of writing to the publication process. 

INSIDE AN EDITOR’S BRAIN - Free
Newsletter

If you’re looking for expert publishing advice, insider knowledge, and an extra dose of motivation—all for free—Inside an Editor’s Brain is for you. Each week, I cover topics like pacing, querying, and breaking into the industry with guest posts from successful authors and interviews with publishing insiders.

This isn’t just a newsletter—it’s your backstage pass to a career in commercial fiction. Whether you’re just starting out or looking to level up, think of me as your experienced (and supportive) guide through a process that often feels overwhelming and isolating.

Questions about any of these services or are looking for something you don’t see listed? Please visit my FAQs page or email me directly.

“Working with Kristen was a fantastic editorial and learning experience, and the investment was offset by the resultant advance—the largest of my career. Best of all, I’m a better writer today because of it.”

— VICKI PETTERSSON, New York Times & USA Today Bestselling Author

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